I think I've done all I really can for Chapter 1 for now. Chapter 2 looks good, though it probably needs some going over later.
There are times when I'm writing that I wish I could let people hear the music I listen to while writing. Music is a huge part of life for me and nothing gets me more inspired to write than good music. Sometimes it almost feels like my writing is incomplete if the reader doesn't know the music I have in mind for a given scene.